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in our total destruction, not our ascension. in our total destruction, not our ascension." closing " missing
tomorrow be our greatest allies. tomorrow be our greatest allies." closing " missing
in our total destruction, not our ascension. in our total destruction, not our ascension." closing " missing
rituals of Merlin have faded. rituals of Merlin have faded." closing " missing
applied her viscous intellect applied her vicious intellect
Platform Nine and 3/4 was a marvel Platform Nine and Three-Quarters was a marvel Avoid mixing words and numbers
hidden for the entire eight-hundred kilometre hidden for the entire eight-hundred-kilometre hyphen missing
Muggle repelling charms Muggle-repelling charms not sure
crossed the five metre wide crossed the five-metre wide
in an eight-hundred kilometre subterranean in an eight-hundred-kilometre subterranean
newest toy, a back-mirrored hand of glory. newest toy, a black-mirrored hand of glory. not sure
of the 19th century building, of the 19th-century building,
back on the offending news stand, back on the offending newsstand,
Harry's silver lightening bolt ring rested Harry's silver lightning bolt ring rested
Two red headed boys, Two red-headed boys,
her shoulder and onto the the table. her shoulder and onto the table. one too many
That does't mean I'm glad That doesn't mean I'm glad
He bowed to the slightly flat faced He bowed to the slightly flat-faced
of fourth or fifth year girl's arms of fourth- or fifth-year girl's arms
known the bushy haired witch to known the bushy-haired witch to
rather then befriend them." rather than befriend them."
Her tongue felt like sand paper. Her tongue felt like sandpaper.
and with the faint click clack and with the faint click-clack
For five-hundred years, families For five hundred years, families
made a double fisted jerk downwards, made a double-fisted jerk downwards,
and excited the compartment without turning around. and exited the compartment without turning around.
in six years of so called 'friendship', in six years of so-called 'friendship',
After sometime of this, After some time of this,
along the train-line's edge. along the train line's edge.
single, twinkly eyed smirk. single, twinkly-eyed smirk.
The train click clacked. The floor vibrated The train click-clacked. The floor vibrated
face with blood shot eyes and face with bloodshot eyes and
Immediately the tear stains and blood shot Immediately the tear stains and bloodshot
"Its okay, Lisa. You can do this." "It's okay, Lisa. You can do this."
That good will had lasted until That goodwill had lasted until
There was a audible intake There was an audible intake
The open-seating carriage were the most extreme. The open-seating carriage was the most extreme. Maybe you meant carriages
and was nearly at the middle of the train, and was nearly in the middle of the train,
The Gryffindor glanced to her, saw the crest, The Gryffindor glanced at her, saw the crest,
Heaven forbid someone take the Heaven forbid someone takes the
In the hand not gripping the broomstick he held his newest toy, In the hand not gripping the broomstick, he held his newest toy,
Yes he could fly without one, Yes, he could fly without one,
we would of course have we would, of course, have
"No it doesn't, Fred." "No, it doesn't, Fred."
For the last three years she'd never gone For the last three years, she'd never gone
Hopefully some of the others have Hopefully, some of the others have
before she joined Malfoy shouldn't she? before she joined Malfoy, shouldn't she?
Otherwise they wouldn't see each other Otherwise, they wouldn't see each other
Eventually the blonde gestured Eventually, the blonde gestured
Obviously she wasn't going to be in the first Obviously, she wasn't going to be in the first
Obviously Hermione wasn't going to Obviously, Hermione wasn't going to
"In this compartment we have four females and four "In this compartment, we have four females and four
"Ah, it's nothing, Heiress Greengrass." Nott muttered. "Ah, it's nothing, Heiress Greengrass," Nott muttered.
"That was friendly and cautious was it? "That was friendly and cautious, was it?
Eventually he asked again. Eventually, he asked again.
I can help you Lisa." I can help you, Lisa."
That would work wouldn't it? That would work, wouldn't it?
Eventually Lisa returned the hug Eventually, Lisa returned the hug
They did after all, abandon me." They did, after all, abandon me."
With each furious cry an overpowered spell dented, With each furious cry, an overpowered spell dented,
some of the others have lightened there's. some of the others have lightened theirs.
dumping-him-at-the-Dursleys dumping-him-at-the-Dursleys'
Blaze smirked. "I'll put a sickle Blaise smirked. "I'll put a sickle
he Hogwarts great hal he Hogwarts Great Hall
to the magical edge to their magical limits
he young potter heir didn't he young Potter heir didn't
"Fire whisky?" He started pouring a dram. "Firewhisky?" He started pouring a dram.
Did yon get that? Did you get that?

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"Bulsrode, Millicent."

"Slytherin!"

"Bulstrode, Millicent."

"Slytherin!"

, you will no be happy with the result. , you will not be happy with the result. letter missing
like larva through rock like lava through rock
second group all wore custom made robes. second group all wore custom-made robes.
their dark skinned comrade. their dark-skinned comrade.
towards high calorie fats, carbs, towards high-calorie fats, carbs,
If you wish to tryout for your house team, If you wish to try out for your house team,
on the third floor corridor on the third-floor corridor
corridor on the right hand side. corridor on the right-hand side.
That included the red headed twins That included the red-headed twins
"bed time — off you trot." "bedtime — off you trot."
you will no be happy with the result. you will not be happy with the result.
scrambled out of the silk sheeted bed scrambled out of the silk-sheeted bed
over an official looking parchment. over an official-looking parchment.
and one last medium sized sphere and one last medium-sized sphere
"Any one else?" "Anyone else?"
towards the black board again. towards the blackboard again.
"The system on the left hand side "The system on the left-hand side
clue them in to the power he now wielded over them? clue them into the power he now wielded over them?
into the fire place. into the fireplace.
there is more going on here then just a there is more going on here than just a
gave her his twinkly eyed smile. gave her his twinkly-eyed smile.
to sit down in the two arm chairs opposite to sit down in the two armchairs opposite
An where did yon get that?" An where did you get that?"
wife with a wide eyed stare. wife with a wide-eyed stare.
he'd fallen on a well manicured grass lawn he'd fallen on a well-manicured grass lawn
we don't have one of those hour glasses." we don't have one of those hourglasses."
into a well appointed goblin office. into a well-appointed goblin office.
A large, well dressed goblin wearing A large, well-dressed goblin wearing
and smiled a twenty-four carat smile. and smiled a twenty-four-carat smile.
they didn't even bother to enquire further. they didn't even bother to inquire further.
the image of his long dead sister, the image of his long-dead sister,
Dumbledore took off his moon shaped glasses Dumbledore took off his moon-shaped glasses
using were fourth year spells, using were fourth-year spells,
Not any more. Not with Not anymore. Not with
the core of a fifteen year old the core of a fifteen-year-old
to sink in their parents political to sink in their parents' political
had now showed his true colours had now shown his true colours
Around her the sounds of the older years's laughing Around her the sounds of the older years' laughing
travelling back over the assembled students. travelling back to the assembled students. not sure
longer. Bed was calling. longer. The bed was calling. not sure
and my parents full confidence, and my parents' full confidence,
and pointed his wand into a spot a few and pointed his wand at a spot a few
"Twilfitt and Tatting's. Nice, aren't they?" "Twilfitt and Tattings. Nice, aren't they?" source
What he really needed was a iron clad What he really needed was an iron clad not sure
fought not to look to Harry for praise. fought not to look at Harry for praise. not sure
and one weeks detention and one week's detention maybe without the 's as an alternative
he'd have the core of twenty year old. he'd have the core of a twenty-year-old.
"Well, of course I also hope it won't be…" "Well, of course, I also hope it won't be…"
but in her fatigue it came out more as a shuffle. but in her fatigue, it came out more as a shuffle.
With any luck they'd be With any luck, they'd be
Well, all except Harry of course, she mentally added. Well, all except Harry, of course, she mentally added.
Around her the sounds of the older Around her, the sounds of the older
magical exhaustion was it? magical exhaustion, was it?
Eventually the healer made her way Eventually, the healer made her way
"In public we can act as social convention "In public, we can act as social convention
Over the next seven years you will learn all the basics you Over the next seven years, you will learn all the basics you
Eventually the bottom sphere filled up. Eventually, the bottom sphere filled up.
"Although, now I think about it, "Although, now that I think about it,
McGonagall froze. "Mrs. Granger?" McGonagall froze. "Mrs Granger?"
said the now identified Mrs. Granger. said the now identified Mrs Granger.
All Mrs. to Mrs
All Mr. to Mr
Eventually she sat down and took a deep Eventually, she sat down and took a deep
Well, of course she is. Well, of course, she is.
so presumably she was still with the Grangers. so presumably, she was still with the Grangers.
"Thank you Messrs Thomas and Finnigan. "Thank you, Messrs Thomas and Finnigan.
the general transfiguration spell." McGonagall said, the general transfiguration spell," McGonagall said,
One Hufflepuff girl in particular didn't look well. One Hufflepuff girl, in particular, didn't look well.
Eventually he looked away. Eventually, he looked away.
And he knew he was beyond the top tier of power for his year to begin with. And he knew he was beyond the top tier of power for his year, to begin with.
He glanced backward to look He glanced backwards to look with s is apparently British English
it might act as to interfere it might act as to interfere

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fat and squat head of Hufflepuff house, fat and squat head of Hufflepuff House,
honour to the house of Volf. honour to the House of Volf.
down her wand and loosed a bight red stunner down her wand and loosed a bright red stunner
your nose while you breath out through your nose while you breathe out through
Daphne's lightening bolt ring vibrated. Daphne's lightning bolt ring vibrated.
save our second year duellist from dealing save our second-year duellist from dealing
all the other first year candidates. all the other first-year candidates.
died in a half strangled squeal, died in a half-strangled squeal,
There are gender specific wards There are gender-specific wards
have the wild wand waving of other have the wild wand-waving of other
sorrow is a wizard bred plant sorrow is a wizard-bred plant
A chair scrapped on the stone A chair scraped on the stone
"As an agitent, Professor." "As an agitant, Professor."
trying to get a raise out of Granger. trying to get a rise out of Granger.
I'm going to take my practise a lot I'm going to take my practice a lot
used to all this nobbyness, kay?" used to all this nobbiness, kay?"
to the third floor corridor on to the third-floor corridor on
on the right hand side, on the right-hand side,
floating in mid air just above the stone floating in mid-air just above the stone
a combination of occlumency practise a combination of occlumency practice
throwing accusations and counter accusations. throwing accusations and counter-accusations.
In front of her, harry had his wand pointed In front of her, Harry had his wand pointed
far side of the class-room by the far side of the classroom by the
The wavy haired bookworm slowly The wavy-haired bookworm slowly
leaving him open to counter attack. leaving him open to counter-attack.
Harry landed in the bench in front of her. Harry landed on the bench in front of her.
An stray incarcerous finally A stray incarcerous finally
but in the end I decided not to bother." but in the end, I decided not to bother."
"Pleased to meet you Miss Turpin. "Pleased to meet you, Miss Turpin.
"Yes and we need to find out what that is." "Yes, and we need to find out what that is."
In fact he looked apoplectic. In fact, he looked apoplectic.
Eventually John Potter burst Eventually, John Potter burst
and still the magic flowed. and still, the magic flowed.
"Oh no you don't." "Oh no, you don't."
And still it went on. And still, it went on.
Eventually it stopped. Eventually, it stopped.
It will revert at 9:00am. It will revert at 9:00 am. space missing
Sophie smile turned to confusion. Sophie's smile turned to confusion.
up the back of hands up the back of her hands
form Slytherin and Hufflepuff  from Slytherin and Hufflepuff 
Kevin Entwistle  Kevin Enthwistle  source
hand and elbows hands and elbows
gaped gasped
She swallowed an errand choke She swallowed an errant choke
She followed Harry departing figure, She followed Harry's departing figure,
all this nobbyness, kay? all this nobbyness, 'kay?

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Several minutes later, Harry pocketed a last boiled egg for later, rose from his chair, Several minutes later, Harry pocketed a last boiled egg for later, rose from his chair,
seemed to be his worst case scenario seemed to be his worst-case scenario
to protect Severus from his attentions. to protect Severus from his attention.
it when he did had been a master stroke. it when he did had been a masterstroke.
and total 180 degree turn from and total 180-degree turn from
for this period of self inflicted isolation for this period of self-inflicted isolation
into the resulting secret passage way. into the resulting secret passageway.
He walked though the fidelius charm and the wards He walked through the fidelius charm and the wards
He placed it in-front of a large stack He placed it in front of a large stack
He placed this one in-front of He placed this one in front of
of fast tracking Miss Granger of fast-tracking Miss Granger
statue on the mantle piece and sent a pulse statue on the mantlepiece and sent a pulse
aged to the mid twenties of aged to the mid-twenties of
We'd hopped that Hermione would keep We'd hoped that Hermione would keep
all powerful, and alter-aged all-powerful, and alter-aged
"Welcome to the tax paying community, "Welcome to the taxpaying community,
maybe 5% raising to 15% over three years." maybe 5% rising to 15% over three years."
in his Slytherin dorm four poster in his Slytherin dorm four-poster
the place with a ten foot staff. the place with a ten-foot staff.
The box shifted and became a snuff box The box shifted and became a snuff-box
at the main entrance way at at the main entranceway at
had been a freakin' cerberus. had been a freakin' Cerberus.
cross legged in a corner, cross-legged in a corner,
He shifted on the hard wood floor He shifted on the hardwood floor
and stared at the two red headed twins. and stared at the two red-headed twins.
just like every other book shelf. just like every other bookshelf.
revelling a confined stone passageway revealing a confined stone passageway
a glance at the ward work as they left. a glance at the ward-work as they left.
very impressive for almost fourteen year olds. very impressive for almost fourteen-year-olds.
surprise of the two red heads, surprise of the two redheads,
it wasn't through our secret passage way it wasn't through our secret passageway
They stalled, mid turn. They stalled, mid-turn.
well hidden secret passageway well-hidden secret passageway
It was also clear the map took it's readings It was also clear the map took its readings
a dot with a duel label of Quirinus Quirrell a dot with a dual label of Quirinus Quirrell
pacing a far flung study. pacing a far-flung study.
their independent occlumency practise was true. their independent occlumency practice was true.
an arrogant little toe rag." an arrogant little toerag."
instantaneous build up of magic instantaneous build-up of magic
The super high-dose ageing potion took affect, The super high-dose ageing potion took effect,
his true eleven year old body his true eleven-year-old body
of a seventy year old man of a seventy-year-old man
The polyjuice potion took affect, changing The polyjuice potion took effect, changing
this time in his mid twenties this time in his mid-twenties
The beautification potion took affect, The beautification potion took effect,
now on his face, with his finger tips now on his face, with his fingertips
Maybe you disapprove of my polices Maybe you disapprove of my policies
"I think it's self serving and short sighted." "I think it's self-serving and short-sighted."
me to the short sighted bit. me to the short-sighted bit.
to protect the wellbeing to protect the well-being
They were both group based. They were both group-based.
completing the effect of a well lived in drawing room. completing the effect of a well lived-in drawing-room.
and brought it to the masks lips. and brought it to the mask's lips.
Harry woke in his Slytherin dorm four poster Harry woke in his Slytherin-dorm four-poster
where people were did they? where people were, did they?
but she has being getting advanced but she has been getting advanced
I imagine to teach someone something like occlumency would take that. I imagine teaching someone something like occlumency would take that.
nd an eighth sickles a week? nd an eighth sickle a week?
Three points in particular stood out as Three points, in particular, stood out as
After all that's happened?" After all, that's happened?"
got him going did he? got him going, did he?
Eventually she spoke. Eventually, she spoke.
Certainly a lot had changed Certainly, a lot had changed
Macavity's feathers were as gray Macavity's feathers were as grey
Later next day, Dumbledore sat Later the next day, Dumbledore sat
if the looks of the other students were to go by were anything to go by
closely moulded on the Dark Lord closely modelled on the Dark Lord
inked his Phoenix feather quill inked his Phoenix-feather quill
few minutes of rinsing off later few minutes of rinsing-off later
The young Heir had such The young heir had such
quarter inch layer quarter-inch layer
left the Slytherin first years dorms left the Slytherin first-year dorms
period of self inflicted isolation period of self-inflicted isolation
and a dong of gong and the sound of a gong or a sounded gong
By the window, perched his owl, By the window perched his owl, remove comma
The last one was a small island in the Shetlands. The last one was a small island in the Orkneys.
identical green inked addresses identical green-inked addresses
in the formally desert like ballroom in the formerly desert like ballroom
a low table already ladened with bottles a low table already laden with bottles
took it selectively serious took it selectively seriously
described as big ass stones described as big-ass stones
in front of the classes quicker students in front of the class' quicker students
through his holly and phoenix feather wand phoenix-feather wand
the cardboard snuffbox back the cardboard snuff box back
at the main entrance way at at the main entranceway at
it never paid to be too careful it never hurt to be too careful
Ohhhh Bugger Ohhhh. Bugger dot missing
just as filch comes around just as Filch comes around
almost instantaneous build up of magic almost instantaneous build-up of magic
a single magical build up behind a single magical build-up behind
to inspect his handy work to inspect his handiwork
with his finger tips with his fingertips
and hugged him as best as she could and hugged him as best she could
or laws that I've helped passed or laws that I've helped pass
the job for which he is almost uniquely positioned for. double for, remove on
uninterested in reigning in the irate girl uninterested in reining-in the irate girl
picked up his phoenix feather quill, picked up his phoenix-feather quill,
what you're talking about Harry" what you're talking about Harry,"
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a thumbed nose to their oily haired professor a thumbed nose to their oily-haired professor
for imperfectly sliced ingredients for imperfectly-sliced ingredients
o push back the time for meeting up in person a few weeks o push back the time for meeting up in person by a few weeks
Eleven year old Harry Potter sat cross legged Eleven-year-old Harry Potter sat cross-legged
also stood, wand trained on the elf also stood, wands trained on the elf
"Are any other elves tasked such? "Are any other elves tasked as such?
shelf with his non wand holding fingers. shelf with his non-wand-holding fingers.
about what is in the third floor corridor about what is in the third-floor corridor
in the sixth draw down on the right. in the sixth drawer down on the right.
with a half dozen small ward stones with a half-dozen small ward stones
Hermione lips formed an o. Hermione lips formed an O.
Might give for some interesting (Might make for) or (Might give some)
tunnels under the sea bed that tunnels under the seabed that
third stone and picked up the forth. third stone and picked up the fourth.
The under water thing I mean. The underwater thing I mean.
He looked at her with deadpanned eyes. He looked at her with deadpan eyes.
Her mouth dropped. Her jaw dropped.
the value of one years worth the value of one year's worth Possible second way:

less than one year's worth of labour now

watching his every moment watching his every movement
we haven't gone though any we haven't gone through any
Hermione voice washed over him Hermione's voice washed over him
do a quick test, Okay?" do a quick test, okay?"
Daphne's eye-brows raised. Daphne's eyebrows raised.
"So, what are we going to do?" Can we do anything more from here?" Surplus punctuation after ‘do?’
a florescent pick affair a fluorescent pink affair two mistakes
the cold blooded calculus the cold-blooded calculus
He could think of few people He could think of a few people
and ruled out each one of the them. and ruled out each one of them.
massively over reading this massively over-reading this
man, still in full wizards robes man, still in full wizard's robes or wizard robes
our so called golden year our so-called golden year
so far beyond their class mates as so far beyond their classmates as
reminded her of her parent's practise reminded her of her parents' practice two mistakes
looked like a seventh year Hufflepuff looked like a seventh-year Hufflepuff
She pulled a pot plant She pulled a potted plant
as her breakfast threaten as her breakfast threatened
She felt slightly light headed. She felt slightly lightheaded.
still littered the desk top still littered the desktop
three hundred year old charms text book three hundred years old charms textbook two mistakes
Trippy the drugged again Trippy the drugged-again
here was nothing of help to them here was nothing of use to help them
The corner's of Harry lips The corners of Harry lips
less tired after getting off the Hogwarts express less tired after getting off the Hogwarts Express
broke into a full on ear to ear grin broke into a full-on ear-to-ear grin two mistakes
fine layer of foul smelling dampness. fine layer of foul-smelling dampness.
about what is in the third floor corridor?" what is in the third-floor corridor?"
Do you know what is in the third floor corridor?" what is in the third-floor corridor?"
we're breaking into the third floor we're breaking into the third-floor
ward tunnels under the sea bed ward tunnels under the seabed
we haven't gone though any we haven't gone through any
and shadow though the many shelves and shadow through the many shelves
sure they were in the third floor corridor. sure they were in the third-floor corridor.
Its in all our interests It's in all our interests
part time, over five years part-time, over five years
it to an ever growing pile it to an ever-growing pile
interesting titbit on the interesting tidbit on the
quick search through quick-search through
"—you it would work!" not sure :D
Hermione eyes shone. Hermione's eyes shone.
Hermione lips formed Hermione's lips formed
than one years worth than one year's worth
Hermione voice washed Hermione's voice washed
The corner's of Harry lips twitched The corner's of Harry's lips twitched
Not included myself, Not including myself, both work
nd Granger were the future nd Granger was the future
Instead she'd been Instead, she'd been comma
Eventually she spoke in a small quiet Eventually, she spoke in a small quiet comma
For starters he possesses For starters, he possesses comma
was disconcerting to say the least. was disconcerting, to say the least. comma

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the auror's wings the aurors' wings
Harry looked incredulous over his book Harry looked incredulously over his book
stared at Her and Harry stared at her and Harry
the Potter's deathly hallow the Potter's Deathly Hallow

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the looks many of the House had been the looks many of the house had been
It's not even 'eclektic.'" It's not even 'eclektic'." single quote inside dot because British English

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He wan't hungry though He wasn't hungry though
Why oh why Why, oh why comma
the smile of kneazle the smile of a kneazle
the baron as head the baron as Head
It was both intoxicating it was both intoxicating lowercase
Grand Warlock Chief Warlock not sure, maybe historical reasons?

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your independent council your independent counsel different meaning
that's my council that's my counsel different meaning
the baron as head

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scared scarred
Ginny eyes Ginny's eyes
attic was similarly attic were similarly
tinniest tiniest

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a daughter of the house of Black." a daughter of the House of Black."
the house of Black. The bookcase the House of Black. The bookcase
outside her then friends houses outside her then friends' houses
and blew a fuse and blown a fuse
A total control can be Total control can be not sure
Diagon alley Diagon Alley
already been taught be him? already been taught by him?
I barley got I barely got

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It made as thought to move, but A It made as though to move, but A
and across the country side as and across the countryside as
My neither, Me neither

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Now her lord owned the sex contract" Now her lord owned the sex contract

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the slot and the pride the House takes the slot and the pride the house takes
He held up contract from Volf. He held up the contract from Volf.
Of course, that was were he could Of course, that was where he could
benny hill Benny Hill
shrieking shack window Shrieking Shack window
how much of quirrell how much of Quirrell
Hermione's started pacing frantically Hermione's heart started pacing frantically word missing

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two then just two than just
As a responsibly adult, I have As a responsible adult, I have
We'll use liquid memories siphoned off before hand We'll use liquid memories siphoned off beforehand
of what we're doing, and blindfolding me of what we're doing and blindfolding me no comma
by Hermione with the ear piece by Hermione with the earpiece
, Daphne will fit me with the ear piece , Daphne will fit me with the earpiece
When step 5 starts, a new paragraph
He'd tried on one of the ear pieces He'd tried on one of the earpieces
Harry brought out the ear pieces Harry brought out the earpieces
half of the mirror ear piece pair half of the mirror earpiece pair

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not of the House, under threat not of the house, under threat
this close to stealing House secrets." this close to stealing house secrets."
and the light were squeaking and the lights were saying that he was going t 2 mistakes
so long as it is controlled I dear say so long as it is controlled I dare say

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of Britain, an Ancient House at least of Britain, an Ancient house at least
tugging at their mother's sleeves, tugging at their **mothers'** sleeves,

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with expert witnesses, all oh whom were Light. with expert witnesses, all of whom were Light.
Thus we intent to show how Thus we intend to show how
Given the clear and cut nature Given the clear-cut nature
Is there anyway this wand Is there any way this wand
department of mysteries Department of Mysteries check for other instances
miss-trial mistrial

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Barring the weight of his fate alone Bearing the weight of his fate alone
"How is the he not dead?" "How is he not dead?"
and spoke into the ear piece. and spoke into the earpiece.
of The Founders Club of the Founders Club

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The coast line was still a stone's The coastline was still a stone's
and she must to be obtained legally and she must be obtained legally

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He half stumbled up He half-stumbled up
that felt all together too that felt altogether too

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his fourth year in Ravenclaw house. his fourth year in Ravenclaw House.
Robert Longsdale — Ravenclaw house." Robert Longsdale — Ravenclaw House."

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